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Aditya AgarwalAIR 1· 2024

Question Q2 (continuation)GS2GS2

[Context/Continuation from prior page - discussing women's participation and women organisation impacts]

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Introduction

The women participation from various regional background and diverse socio-economic strata raised their voices through organization.

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Main Body

Impacts of women organisation:

Education of women increased (e.g., Pandita Ramabai became first female graduate)
Social evils such as infanticide and sati were completely banned
Universal adult franchise was added in the constitution
Women were given equal rights and prohibition on discrimination based on gender

Contemporary relevance: The women organisations are focusing on empowerment through SHGs and reservation (political).

The long-rooted history of these organizations has helped in inclusion and liquidity of women.

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Conclusion

However, current ranking in global gender gap report (12/146) showcases we have a long way to go.

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This is a continuation from previous page
  • Comprehensive coverage of historical impacts
  • Specific examples provided (Pandita Ramabai)
  • Links contemporary relevance with current statistics
  • Uses diagram/structured bullet points for clarity

Topper

Aditya Agarwal

AIR 12024

Subject & Paper

GS2GS2

Topic

Women's Participation and Organization

Impact of Women Organizations

Education, Social Evils, Rights and Contemporary Relevance

Writing Stats

110

Total words

3

Paragraphs

4

Bullets