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Ananya RanaAIR 60

Question 3Discuss the role in advancing the causeGS1GS1

भारत के स्वतंत्रता संग्राम को आगे बढ़ाने में विदेशों में रहने वाले भारतीयों द्वारा निभाई गई भूमिका पर चर्चा कीजिए। (उत्तर 150 शब्दों में दीजिए) / Discuss the role played by Indians living abroad in advancing the cause of India's freedom struggle. (Answer in 150 words)

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Introduction

During the course of India's freedom struggle, many Indians took refuge in countries abroad so as to escape the wrath of colonial Raj and support their cause from the country of their living.

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Main Body

Role of Indians living abroad in advancing cause of India's freedom struggle.

1Formation of Indian National Army - was the brainchild of Mohan Singh who consolidated POWs into one unit.
2Support in literary form - Indians brought out magazines and newspapers (e) Talwar by Virendranath Chattopadhyay in Germany.
3Symbolic Support for India's cause - to build public opinion against British Raj (e) Madam Lama raised Indian flag in Paris.
4Formation of groupings with revolutionary times (e) Shadar Party in USA
5Creation of like-minded community
6Minal Mela by Saraskar.
6Collection of funds for Indian cause (a) United India House.
7Assassination of corrupt officials - Udham Singh assassinated General Dyre after Jallianwala Bazh massacre.
2Support in literary form - Indians brought out magazines and newspapers (e) Talwar by Virendranath Chattopadhyay in Germany.
3Symbolic Support for India's cause - to build public opinion against British Raj (e) Madam Lama raised Indian flag in Paris.
4Formation of groupings with revolutionary times (e) Shadar Party in USA
5Creation of like-minded community
6Minal Mela by Saraskar.
6Collection of funds for Indian cause (a) United India House.
7Assassination of corrupt officials - Udham Singh assassinated General Dyre after Jallianwala Bazh massacre.
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Conclusion

Indians abroad sustained the public opinion and supported freedom cause which finally culminated in 1947.

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Diagram

Map of India with labels: Virendranath Chattopadhyay (Germany), Gadar Party, Mohan Singh, Madam Lama (Paris), Rash Behari Bose. Below map: 'Some Indians working from abroad'

  • Clear enumeration of various roles
  • Specific examples with names and places
  • Covers multiple dimensions of overseas support (military, literary, symbolic, financial, organizational)
  • Includes a relevant diagram showing geographical locations

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Page 10

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Ananya Rana

AIR 60

Subject & Paper

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Topic

The Freedom Struggle

Final Phase

Role of Indians abroad in freedom struggle

Writing Stats

257

Total words

15

Paragraphs

Formal, structured, with enumerated points

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