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Aditya Agarwal

Question 3GS4GS1

Could the undesirable situation have been avoided? How?

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Introduction

Yes, the undesirable situation could have been avoided by :-

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Main Body

i) Transparent tendering system

Application
Process of selection
Results
opportunity to counter any process or grievance redressal.

ii) Allowing other person to take on the tendering process citing possible conflict of interest.

iii) Making known the possible implications of such decision to higher committee beforehand and asking for their approval.

Such situations force a civil servant towards inactivity and they adopt more conventional methods to avoid scrutiny. However, the goal of providing best quality of services and integrity of

decision must guide the actions of civil servants without fear of being scrutinized.

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Conclusion

The goal of providing best quality of services and integrity of decision must guide the actions of civil servants without fear of being scrutinized.

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  • Provides concrete institutional mechanisms
  • Addresses transparency at all stages
  • Recognizes structural issues forcing civil servants into inactivity
  • Mentions higher committee oversight

Topper

Aditya Agarwal

Subject & Paper

GS4GS1

Topic

Ethics

Conflict of Interest and Accountability

Preventive Measures and Transparency

Writing Stats

130

Total words

4

Paragraphs

4

Bullets

formal analytical

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